She is not only beautiful but also kind-hearted
她不但美丽而且善良
She is not only strong and but also courageous
她不但强壮而且勇敢
She has the largest population in the world.
她拥有世界上最大的人口
She has the most ancient history in the world.
她拥有世界上最古老的历史
She is a star in the east of the world.
她是世界东方的一颗明星
Her land is not only broad and but also fertile
她的土地不但广阔而其富饶
Her people are not only hard-working but also courageous
她的人们不但勤劳而其勇敢
She is a great loong growing up in the east of the world.
她是世界东方一条正在崛起的巨龙
She is our beloved motherland – China.
她就是我们亲爱的祖国-中国。
Although we have the most ancient history, but our new China is still very young, and recently the new China has just passed the 60th birthday.
尽管我们拥有最古老的历史，但是我们新中国还是很年轻的，最近新中国才过了她的第60个生日。
In this extraordinary 60 years, we have experienced a lot of disasters.
在这不平凡的60年里，我们经历了很多的灾难，
However, we successfully pass through them.
但是我们成功的渡过去了，
We do not bow before the disaster, but fight the disasters bravely such as 1976 Tangshan earthquake, the great flood in 1998, South snowstorm and May 12 great earthquake in Sichuan Province.
我们没有在灾难面前低头，而是勇敢的与灾难做斗争。
1976年 唐山大地震 1998年大洪水 南方雪灾 5月12日，四川汶川大地震
Under the leadership of the party, we unite together to pass through the difficulties and rebuild our homes
在党的领导下，我们众志成城，万众一心，一起渡过了难关，重建了家园。
In this extraordinary 60 years, we have also found some of our own shortcomings such as Damage to the environment, too much population and imbalance of economic development.
在这不平凡的60年里，我们也发现了自己的一些不足。环境的破坏，过多的人口，经济发展的不平衡。
However, we have found these problems and are looking for potential problems
但是，我们发现了这些问题，并正在寻找潜在的问题。
We are working to solve our problems and have resolved some of our problems.
我们正在努力的解决我们的问题，并已经解决了我们的一些问题。
In this extraordinary 60 years, we have also made a lot of achievements.
在这不平凡的60年里，我们也取得了很多的成绩。
We launch many rockets and satellites, and success rate has achieved 100%.
我们发射的火箭和卫星的成功率达到了100%。
We have taken a leading position in the aerospace field.
我们已经在航天领域处于领先地位。
China is the fourth economic entity in the world, and affects the entire world's economy.
中国现在是世界第四的经济体，并影响着整个世界的经济。
In agriculture, the hybrid rice cultivated in our country, not only solves the problem of feeding the Chinese people, but also the problem of feeding the world's people.
在农业上，我们国家培育出杂交水稻，不但解决了中国人的吃饭问题，同时也解决了世界人民的吃饭问题。
In our country has successfully hosted the Beijing Olympic Games, showing the strength of our country and promoting world peace.
我们国家有成功的举办了北京奥运会，彰显了我们国家的实力，促进了世界的和平。
Now China is an indispensable force in world development.
现在的中国已经是世界发展不可少的一股力量。
We also made a great contribution to the development of the world.
我们也为世界的发展做出了很大的贡献。
Our growth rate is higher than any other countries in the world.
我们的发展速度是世界上其他任何国家都赶不上的。
However, some people still doubt our Chinese model.
但是还是有些人怀疑我们的中国模式不好。
But the quality of the Chinese model is determined by the Chinese people.
但是中国模式的好坏是由中国人民决定的。
Now we are growing up in such a favorable environment.
现在我们成长在这样优越的环境当中，
Our life is so happy,
我们的生活是这样的幸福，
All people are closely united,
所有的民族团结一心，
How can any Chinese people not support their own country?
又有哪个中国人又会不支持自己的祖国呢，
We do not need to care about those doubts,
我们不需要理会那些怀疑，
The strength and progress of our nation is the best response to the doubt.
我们祖国的强大和我们生活的进步就是对怀疑最好的回应。
Our nation is modest, but we need to be proud.
我们是一个谦虚的民族，但是我们需要骄傲。
Our nation is cautious, but we need to show ourselves.
我们是一个谨慎的民族，但是我们需要展示。
Our nation is peaceful, but we need confidence to lead the world trend.
我们是一个和平的民族，但是我们需要自信。
If we take the right path, we should strengthen our faith, no matter what others say.
如果我们走的是一条正确的道路，我们应该坚定自己的信念，勇敢的走下去，不管别人说什么。
I love you, China, and I’m so proud of being a Chinese. I’m proud that I’ve got the beautiful yellow skin, black eyes and black hair. As a young student, all we should do is to study hard and devote ourselves whole-heartedly in the future, to the great cause of building you into an even stronger and greater country in the world
I will dedicate my prime youth to you,
I will devote my precious youth to you。
（注：文中还有一些错误没有改正）
