问题补充:
Dear Chairman,
I’m a student from Class1, Grade3. I want to join their club. At school, I study very hardly, and I’m always ready to help others. I got on well with my classmates but I like to help them with their lessons. I often help the old to crossing the road. On the bus, I often offer any possible help to any others. On weekends, I usually go to the park pick up rubbish. I want to join the club very much. For one reason,, I like to make friend and work with others. For other, I will have more chances to help others. I would be glad if accepting..
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解析:
1.their 改为your,因为这里说的是我加入你们的俱乐部。
2.hardly改为hard,因为hard既是形容词,又是副词。而hardly“几乎的”。
3.got改get,因为全文用的都是过去式。
4.but改为and,因为这里表示的是并列关系,而不是转折关系。
5.crossing改为cross,因为help sb to do 而不是doing。
6.去掉any,因为offer sth to sb为主动给别人提供帮助,给别人提供给帮助用others就可以,不必用any来修饰。
7.在park后面加上to,因为我们去公园的目的是为了捡垃圾,to do表示的是目的。
8.make friends 是固定搭配,翻译为交朋友。
9.固定结构,for one reason, for another;译为一方面;另一方面。
10.If引导的虚拟条件句,对将来的虚拟,if引导的从句用过去式/were to do/should do,后面的主句用would/should/might do sth.这里表达的是“I would be glad if (I was) accepted.由于前后主语一致,将主句的主语和系动词全都省略了。