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根据汉语提示,完成短文,不少于80字。 要求:书写工整,语句通顺,有逻辑性。
上周六我们在李老师的帮助下一起乘火车去了首都北京,这是我们第一次去北京旅游的介绍。
Many places of interest
Tian’anmen Square
Summer Palace
Palace Museum
The Great Wall
Activities
take photos
eat delicious food
buy some souvenir
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feelings
Learn a lot
hope to visit again
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Last Saturday, we went to the capital of China---Beijing, with the help of Mr Li. We went there by train. It is the first time for us to be there, so we were very excited.
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(答案→)Last Saturday, we went to the capital of China---Beijing, with the help of Mr Li. We went there by train. It is the first time for us to be there, so we were very excited.
解析:这不仅是一篇给材料作文而且给出了文中重点信息的英文,所以本篇作文难度并不大。只要选用合适的词语把给出的句子连接好就能拿分。恰当的使用短语会给文章增光添彩,如“在李老师的帮助下”表达为“with the help of mr li”,会增加得分点。长句的使用会让文章更出彩,本文的activities就可以用and连接成表先后关系的长句。本篇是一篇简单的记叙文,按照其先后顺序把句子所缺的主谓宾补起来就ok了
根据汉语提示 完成短文 不少于80字。 要求:书写工整 语句通顺 有逻辑性。上周六我们在李老师的帮助下一起乘火车去了首都北京 这是我们第一次去北京旅游的介绍。 Many place