怎样写出一篇出色的说明文“My favorite teacher”呢?
可以采用“煮圆栗树”策略(主旨 原因例子 重述)
1. 直抒胸臆(主旨)
写出主旨句。比如介绍袁sir(英语名Michael),尽量避免苍白的描述“Michael is a teacher.”,可以写成“Michael is one of the best English teachers I have ever met.”
2. 具体原因
承接上文,可以把原因具体化:I think all students need a kind teacher to guide them, so they can always move in the right direction.
3. 让人信服的例子
写出1-3条例子,让读者脑补这些生动的画面,比如:I never learned English much before I heard of Michael, but now I follow his Wechat official account and read the articles he post. Reading has helped me improve my writing ability in English, and Im making great progress.
4. 重述主旨
如果说,读者读完文章只记住了一个句子的话,那通常是最后一句。所以,换个词换个句型换个方式重述主旨(一定不要跟文章第一句完全一致哦,英文讨厌重复!)
Michael has helped thousands of students learn English. He deserves the title of "Super Teacher" more than anyone I have ever met.
4个部分合体,稍加润色,一篇A类范文就诞生了。
My Favorite Teacher
Michael is one of the best English teachers I have ever met.
I think all students need a kind teacher to guide them, so they can always move in the right direction. I didn use to learn English much before I heard of Michael, but now I follow his Wechat official account and read the articles he post. Reading has helped me improve my writing ability in English, and Im making remarkable progress.
袁sir是我见过的最好的英语老师之一。
我认为所有的学生都需要一位善良的老师来引导他们,这样他们才能始终朝着正确的方向前进。在听说袁sir之前,我基本不学英语,但现在我订阅了他的微信公众号,阅读他每天发布的文章。阅读帮助我提高了英语写作能力,现在我取得了很大的进步。
袁sir帮助过数千名学生学习英语。他比我见过的任何人都更值得“超级教师”称号。
请思考:
本文的句子、段落结构、写法还可以用于哪类文章中?
范文虽好,可不要忘记更重要的写作策略哦!就像文章说的那样,有了精读的输入,才能有高质量的写作输出,但只是看懂方法没什么大用,要及时背诵,换几个话题仿写下练练笔,能举一反三才是真的会了,否则到考场上还是不知如何下笔!加油!